Task description this week for writing we are learning about pohutukawa i have writen a story about pohutukawa. please leave a postive comment on my blog.
Retell: Pohutukawa
Retell the Myth and Legend about Pohutukawa.
Planning:
| Characters | |
| Beginning – how does it start? | |
| Middle – what is happening? | |
| End – how does it end? |
Make sure you use descriptive language to make the story more interesting. Pull the readers in to read YOUR writing, make it fun!
Start your writing here:
→once upon a time a maori myth and legend about pohutukawa one of the matariki stars now let get started everyone once upon a time in a village
People keep dying but the people that had pass did not know where to go after they pass so the people that had pass had just stay in there village but when pohutukawa saw the people that had pass in there village then she got and sad and came down from the sky and and went to a cliff and started sing but when she started to sing she header her something or someone sing in the other direction but when pohutukawa got to the place there was nothing but a tree so pohutukawa started to sing again and then she header the tree sing and then pohutukawa got an idea pohutukawa put her hand on the tree and the tree started to sing and all the people that had pass in the village came to the tree and went into it and the tree went to the underworld but when they went to the underworld it was not bad when they went there they wore at pace and then when all the people that had pass had gone into that tree pohutukawa went back up to her brothers and sister and tode her brothers and sister the story of the people that had pass the end positve