When people read this recount they should feel interested and excited.
Plan of my paragraph topics: Use the right side to add in your planning
Orientates and hooks
Makes the reader want to keep reading
|Who: Duffy, Team 4 and Team 5
What: Duffy Assembly
Where: School hall
When: Friday afternoon
Why: To have fun and to learn about Duffy’s adventures.
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What happened at the beginning of Duffy’s journey?
|Duffy was at home and Stuffy came to visit.
Duffy found stuffy a bit annoying and Stuffy couldn’t sleep
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What happened to Duffy when he was in space?
|Duffy found a worm hole and went into space and got stuck there.
Duff-Zip and Stuff-Zip were there
They had an adventure
|4. Body Paragraph 3
How did the Duffy performance end? Did Duffy make it back?
|Duffy made it back to his room and his book was fixed.
Summarising the main points and sharing how you felt during the performance.
|I felt happy because the performance was really great.
Start Writing here
On a windy Friday afternoon at Pt England School Team 4 and Team 5 went to the hall to go see the
A show first duffy came back from school and then he put his bag down on the table and the he look at has space book
And then his dad came in the room and he said that they wore going to have pizza for dinner and his dad said to duffy the your little cousin is here and then Stuff came in to say hi to his cousin
And then they look at the stars and then duffy dad said that dinner was here and they went to dinner
And then when they went back to there room And the Stuff cod not sleep And the Stuff came to duffy room and sleep in duffy room And then duffy wok up and saw a black hole And went thro it and then
He saw Duff-Zip and Stuff-Zip and got duffy home.
Hi my name is Ace and I am a year 5 student at Pt England School. I am in room 10 and my teacher this year is Miss Parrant. Maths is my favourite subject. I like to play with my friends after school. I like playing with my sister and I like going to the park. What I love the most is playing with my family My hobbies are playing games on my pc. Please leave a positive comment on my blog.